In Morrow's Light

[robust vigil]

In morrow's light do sombre not,
For thus yonder no sorrow wander,
The sun doth come with joyous wonder,
Until Suns dwell in awe of umbra,

Quietness and empty space,
Become our hearts and souls embrace,
For in our spirits we do encase,
Beauty, balance, the finest tastes,

A sense of soothing our souls do savour,
as they become our strongest saviour,
flavour flourishes within our taper,
The richest sweet craving for flavour,

And I will wager, there are none braver,
As fortune lather in now and not later,
Sewn with labour at the base of the glacier,
The words weaved wisely upon this paper.

<@&1145760802666717234> please and thank you 🪄

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One day me and technology will get along:)

[solemn forum]

It’s wonderful, I am focusing a lot more on how well it’s written, I see it with an almost classy feel, almost like if it was a person it would be a rich old timer

[robust vigil]

Elderly well established gentlemen? 😄 Thank you!

[nova sundial]

it's good overall but using flavour twice consecutively feels a little off

maybe you could say:
a sense of soothing our souls do savour
as they become our strongest saviour,
flourishing tastes within our taper,
the richest sweet craving for flavour.

[robust vigil]

I didn't realise I was using those twice thank you for pointing it out. I had made some last minute edits before posting. Thank you.

And for the suggestion:)