my body is beautiful -mai | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

still briar Jan 12, 2024, 10:22 PM

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My eyes are do dark that even the abyss would get lost in them

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Maybe you can try to make comparisons to make it way more poetical

pseudo galeBOT Jan 12, 2024, 10:23 PM

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still briar Jan 12, 2024, 10:24 PM

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Well

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Take for example waist

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What would u compare it with?

still briar Jan 13, 2024, 5:47 AM

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And hourglass that only time could steal it away from you

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Sounds good?

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"my body is the archetype of human organic construct,,

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"my body is so bright in the human eye,for it is the one God created all others by,in all its beauty, and its splandour,it is alone the essence of all other bodies"

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