a ! -mai | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

eternal osprey Jan 9, 2024, 11:59 PM

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That reminded me of my crush. Even though I have not been in contact with her, she is the love of my life. So yea I kind of took a step back from what you were saying and sort of looked at it like how my thoughts of her is about as real as she really is.

upbeat mistBOT Jan 10, 2024, 12:01 AM

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*(this is abt a

close friend btw but love

the connection<3)*

tropic delta Jan 10, 2024, 12:40 AM

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I really enjoyed how it developed a story as I continued to read it from start to finish c: well done!

winter bone Jan 10, 2024, 8:32 PM

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Nice poem its has rhyme and all

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Its very good

languid fjord Jan 20, 2024, 7:36 PM

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Nice!

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👏

last lily Jan 20, 2024, 8:41 PM

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"your stomach rips in half" wouldnt sound bit better?

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Good stuff

grim hamlet Jan 20, 2024, 8:48 PM

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👏👏👏

#a ! -mai