new schools are hard -mai | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

limpid mortar Jan 9, 2024, 5:03 AM

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I like how most of it rhymed, the steady flow was pleasing to read

zenith trout Jan 9, 2024, 5:07 AM

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The flow is so easy to follow. The rhyme scheme is all over. Your enjambment is peak BTW. Nice work

zenith trout Jan 9, 2024, 11:05 AM

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Oh enjambment continuation of a line in another line for a certain effect. Like e.g from one of my works

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Example:
I loved her on May,
June,
July,

She is my everything
I would
Never lie

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Manipulation the line order is what crates Enjambment. And your couplets achieve it marvelously

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