#Dreams, By Dave Lauer

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bitter talonBOT
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Wonderful! @supple widget has just pregressed to level 9!

agile yoke
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Good piece Dave! Vulnerable subject. I’d like to point out that in some instances you used the wrong version of you’re/your. That’d be the only thing I’d touch up

harsh temple
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Amazing piece. I just started poetry. This is really good