Awww that's romantic
#Girls
hallow gate
I wish men would put me on such a pedestal!
Lol
I like the rhyme scheme and stanzas. I use the 4 lines and ABAB structure myself.
It's a good one! I would say the one like I do not understand is the "And yet you would rather be someone else" line.
That's my only confusion
south ridge
love
i feel this way
words don’t make my problems go away
words just numb them
yet i feel these words have meaning
tawdry tapir
this is how i feel when i look at my (platonic) gfs
south ridge
more than just words
white bough