#in tribute to the Cosmos

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charred oyster
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all-encompassing, ever expanding
everywhere went nowhere, nothing became everything
singularity, modularity,
tainted purity
in and out,
out is in,
lift your eyes, Denizen

four billion bodies, ever increasing
three unsolved mysteries, living and breathing
two of a kind in death’s dance
one gives chase, the other in trance

singular, modular, all you’d ever need
make double, listen, take heed.
a trio torches trees to torture these
forces, bend the unbendable, break the unamenable,

give rise to me, O Sinner
cast your shadow
lay waste to the unforeseeable, give in to violet liminality.
all is Nothing. voidal screams, abyssal dreams torn
wrought from All, born of All, encapsulated
Dreams, Substance, Time
torn asunder
in suspension We begin, in suspension We conclude
wait.

jovial tartan
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"a trio torches trees to torture these" the alliteration goes crazy

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THIS IS CRAZY GOOD

dry bane
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I really enjoyed how you juxtapose the unimaginable expanse of everything that physically exists with quantifiable numbers, especially that numerically count down.

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Even though 4 billion is such a large number it is put into perspective

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Also your use of commas really helped me with understanding the pace

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Also denizen is such an underused word