Use more imagery, so people can get sucked into it, wxplain how grey it was, portray how upset you were
loud orchid
Use more imagery, so people can get sucked into it, wxplain how grey it was, portray how upset you were
Of course =]
novel gate
I really like the melancholic tone this poem is carrying. It's really good
loud orchid
You call this rusty?!?!
novel gate
Your writing is pretty good as it is. I'm not sure I could give you any advice really
You're welcome
loud orchid
I really am an ameture arwnt i 😢