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atomic geyser Nov 13, 2023, 7:55 AM

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@rare dawn

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@odd falcon

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tacit egret Nov 13, 2023, 7:59 AM

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This is great

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The part where it is
"I admit you are the champ,
And my creed is glad to have"

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This part and doesn't suit it it sounds weird

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Substitute with that

atomic geyser Nov 13, 2023, 8:00 AM

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Creed is a reference to Apollo Creed

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The guy Rocky fought

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In rocky 1 and 2

tacit egret Nov 13, 2023, 8:02 AM

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Oh ic

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I meant can we change it to

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"I admit you are the champ,
That my creed is glad to have"

atomic geyser Nov 13, 2023, 8:03 AM

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Yep that makes more sense

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