Short Story - PT.1 - Escaping Destiny | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

quiet atlas Nov 8, 2023, 4:23 PM

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Short Story - PT.1 - Escaping Destiny

safe needle Nov 8, 2023, 4:23 PM

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um naw man
this kinda doesn't hit the spot

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not tryna be rude

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the thought is okay-ish
but i think it's a bit cringe, im terribly sorry

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i mean it could be because i find the entire concept of love cringe BUT i've still read articles and poems on love that are amazing

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but it's not that bad
there's always room for improvement!!
you got this! <33

quiet atlas Nov 8, 2023, 4:27 PM

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I'll try

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anyway thanks on reading it

#Short Story - PT.1 - Escaping Destiny