It's beautifulll. Just one thing and this is absolutely small, but i think it should be 'captivate' instead of 'captivates' in line 7. Other than that the poem is stunning. It really warms the heard
cyan estuary
It's beautifulll. Just one thing and this is absolutely small, but i think it should be 'captivate' instead of 'captivates' in line 7. Other than that the poem is stunning. It really warms the heard
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midnight anvil
I like how snowy area was portrayed as barren/lifeless yet she has "snow white dress" and hair full of snow that brings joy