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hallow trench
light notch
True love is hard to find. But be true to people and you just might find it. I hope you do 😊
Very nice poem person. Slightly long, verbosely expressed. Very well done 👍
peak grove
I quite like the poem, I think it does an impressive job of conveying what unrequited love feels like and the use of imagery is very powerful, an example of this could be with the line "ghost in the crowd" and the person whom they desire being a "beacon"
it's powerful,
the poem also has a really nice flow as each paragraph smoothly moves on to the next, the only thing I would say to you is with things like pronouns, you use "I" and "My" which is perfectly fine but if your going to use pronouns like that, it's best to keep that consistency throughout the poem,