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really nice! i loveee poems that are bisyllabic and extremely simple. i think in poems like these, you could make it more interested and make the reader be even more engrossed in it if u changed the poetry form on the paper, if u wanna know in detail what im talking about, u could dm me or smthng <33
alright, thanks,ill take all of this into consideration