#porcelain faces

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magic oxide
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If you look close enough
You can see them
The threads of the universe
Pulling the stars into constellations
Mysteries waiting to be found
Waiting for us
And who is the puppet master?
Who is this entity?
Fear
What makes you want money?
So you don’t starve
Or so you can get that fancy necklace
To stay relevant
You may think you are free
But your just a slave
Another lifeless puppet
With a porcelain face

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brazen parcel
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lovely piece of writing, well done!

especially love the line "pulling the stars into constellations", really powerful

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since feedback was requested:

  • line 5: "mysteries"
  • line 15: "you're"

either way, great work!