#Reasons..? probably not.

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steady light
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I would love you even if..

My brain, were to die

My Heart, were to lie

My Eyes, were to cry

And my Soul, were to hide

As you we're like my moon, sun and star, you were the reason i've had a life — and also the reason why I'd have to die..

rich orchid
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this poem is very simple, but still effectively accomplishes what it sets out to do. i think i would change up the last line a little tho to smth like this

As you we're like my moon
, sun and star.
you were the reason i lived
and also the reason why I'd have to die..

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just feel like the information is broken up in a more digestable way. the thing with continue the line half way through the space is just a thing i personally do but having

As you we're like my moon , sun and star.

would work just as well