#Translated from Greek, so it might not look that good

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valid kestrel
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In the city where people live in ignorance
I spiral downwards, heading to insanity
Even under the sunlight you cannot distinguish
The fine line between brilliance and madness

One ego, one soul and a thousand dreams
A seemingly unusual entity
My future appears blurry, but it looks like a vision
That formed inside my mind on an afternoon

They look unsettled when they feel the temperature
The cold aura I unknowingly emit
I search for answers in books
While hallucinating figures in the corners of my house

My soul harmonises with the atmosphere
It is cold and dark like the exosphere
On a starry night I offered my body and soul
To a bedridden and hapless sphere of water

My imagination takes me to various places
In various places about which no one else knows
Close your eyes and take my hand
And make a wish as this star is falling

bleak narwhal
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Pretty piece. I didn't notice anything that sounded mistranslated, if you're concerned about that. Exceptional writing.

young egret
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Thank you for sharing your poem, despite the translation the piece is understandable and coherent, thanks for sharing!

humble veldt
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from greek? :0