Flight, To You | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

strong socket Oct 12, 2023, 7:32 AM

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In the clouds
You
And I dream
Flight,
To you

shy pumice Oct 12, 2023, 8:02 AM

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Wooo, short poem!

I was a bit confused about how to read it, partly because of the capitalizations.

I read it as:

In the clouds: You
And I dream flight to you.

I feel like it might be meant to be ambiguous?

strong socket Oct 12, 2023, 9:31 AM

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Ye

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There's no intended way to read it

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I meant for the 2nd line's connection to the 3rd line to be very ambiguous and open

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It also means

In the clouds, you and I dream
Flight to you

But thats just one way to say it

#Flight, To You