#Armenia

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brisk aspen
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I think it's a very good poem!

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brisk aspen
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I feel this is absolutely competition ready in some ways, but I feel it's hard for me to weigh in at times because of the gravity and authenticity the piece makes me feel.

The piece cuts because it feels like it comes from the heart, the balance of devices feels good too; this would make for an insanely strong slam poem I feel! You got this!!