It has great flow and a great and whimsical sense ((:
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teal charm
It’s well deserved ((:
proper steeple
I have an undying love for a) the motif of wind; b) the word ‘Zephyr’; c) your otherwise mellifluous choice of words
modern quarry
I just finished reading this. I have to say this is a very good poem. I love the overall composition of it.
Reminds me of a story I once read
Two lovers, even though separated, were always united by the moon and the stars, which would be visible at night only, when they would reminisce about their youthful love
Great use of the Zephyr as the messenger of love
modern quarry
You are very welcome.
I was talking of none other than Georges Bizet's opera "Les pêcheurs de perles". There is even a performance, where Nadir remembers the tender voice of his lover Leïla, by witnessing the "enchantress night".