Hm. What are you going for in the ending? To get somewhere to yk help build ideas ig
#True Self (incomplete)
vivid panther
broken haven
i honestly have no clue. i just feel that there is something missing. not sure what or even where
summer otter
It feels less like a poem, and more like a plead or a section from a diary.
broken haven
exactly well i can always scrap this one. i kinda forgot i even wrote this one until earlier
vivid panther
It could’ve been a poem🥹just the first parts could’ve just used a bit more imagery