Weekly Poetry #9 (critiques appreciated. Wrote on how I felt in Japan - no access to other account)

[warm jay]

Would love to be told and shown the specifics of these subtle arboreal characteristics in the poem

[rigid token]

I love that this looks like it belongs in a book. The layout of it, the font choice, and how the colors ground you. It's an art piece in itself. And the words bring you in even deeper. There's a wonderful harmony you've achieved here. If you make many like this, I hope that you print them into a collected volume. It's a treasure that deserves to exist beyond the digital.