#bikers

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hidden pine
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You'll hear,
before you see
the biker pull up
in his horse from hell

and he'll look around
(when stalled)
at people, for
acknowledgement
as if his presence
which rapes the ear
could be ignored.

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What if there was a turn to the poem that humanized the biker? Like, a slight noticing that he has scars of some sort, that life has been rough to him

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to humanize the biker

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is to remove him of his bike