#I'm 0Kelvin

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dry trail Aug 10, 2023, 10:27 PM

"I feel a breeze of warmth coming from your lips
So I stick to them
Like a bee to honey
For I have known nothing but cold from my life

So let's break the ice
In front of a campfire
And if the world will ignite
May we turn into ash together."

winter idol Aug 11, 2023, 12:30 AM

I love the analogy of "a bee to honey" and the final stanza flows nicely