Soulful Sanctum

[indigo estuary]

Soulful Sanctum

White noise and water drops,
The most tranquil way to unwind.
The sound of rain upon the roof,
Makes the worries wash away, like a smooth fruit.
Things dissipate.
My personal refuge,
My personal bliss
Where I can rejuvenate
The world of the shower, The place I can ponder and recover.
The water is like my own personal drug,
And its melody is serenading.
Enveloping me in its warmth.
Cascading down into deep fissures of grief
As I close my eyes, I hear the beat of the water drops,
The music of the shower.
I sway to the rhythm,
As if I'm in a trance.
My mind is at ease, And my troubles are gone.
This is my secret place, Where I let go of the pace.
Here I'm at peace,
Where worries all cease.
Let me be.
In my soulful sanctum

[indigo estuary]

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[rain edge]

beautiful, the poem does a great job at communicating relaxation and tranquility! the only thing i would critique is that there are many lines that say in other words "the shower is my safe space", and i think i would simply just add more details about why that is the case - you already do that with the "beat of the waterdrops, music of the shower, i sway to the rhythm" lines, so it's just a matter of either reducing redundant lines or adding more details 😊 other than that, great work!