#That Christmas

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twilit iris
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That Christmas I spend with her,
Will forever be my favorite blur;
The memories we created that day,
Are the ones that will forever stay.
In my mind I'll replay that precious day,
over and over even when I'm old and grey.
I'll cherish the memories forevermore,
And keep them close to my heart's core.
Every moment felt like a dream,
And life was just as it should seem.
I'll still recall that special day.
In my mind it will always stay.

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the first poem I wrote by myself. comments are accepted. do give advices so I can improve more in poetry.

cedar bolt
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This is sweet .. like a little memory that gets tucked away that can be brought out at any time

the tag is acrostic - did you mean for there to be a message?

twilit iris
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well, I wrote it for a dearest friend of mine with whom I spent a Christmas. I wanted to do something special for her on her birthday and I tried to learn some poetry and tried to write it