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unique lantern Jul 22, 2023, 3:24 PM

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full topaz Jul 22, 2023, 3:38 PM

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I have found that taking words out make it flow better can i give an example on the first stanza

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This feeling a lack of trust
Afraid they’ll give up and leave
Even tho your here to listen
I feel I’m not enough for you

unique lantern Jul 22, 2023, 3:52 PM

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Hmm i mean it could improve the flow, but thats just not rlly my style

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Ty for the advice though

full topaz Jul 22, 2023, 3:52 PM

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I get that

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Np

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Good luck

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