wind agate
@quasi sand well honestly the poem isnt that great. Abstract ideas like love dont really work well in poems, and its better to use concrete imagery that makes love something you can visualise. Youre new so its okay to have some bad poems at the start, but yeah imagery is the main part of a poem imo. I aint honestly too great at writing poetry either, but videos on how to do so can really help you.
Other than the love part though, like the lines inbetween do work nicely though, and its easy to tell that this person is important to you atleast, but yeah just using words like love to describe your feelings isnt really good in a poem.
https://youtu.be/arE2yyQe1PY
This video was really helpful for me, so it may be worth checking out if you want to keep writing poems.
