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hybrid summit
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WAY DOWN

Oh, Father, tell me, do we truly get what we deserve?
Or perhaps we receive what's rightfully ours.

Way down we go, plunging into the unknown , Confronting our fears amidst the chaos, Seeking the truth that lies within.

You have let your feet run wild, untamed and unashamed,
As time propels us forward, as we all go down

There's a reckoning that awaits us
will you face it head-on?
Confront the consequences of your actions?

Can you look into the eyes of your choice , un-flinched ?
Or will your gaze turn pale with regret,
for not changing your steps?

Oh, Father, tell me, do we truly get what we deserve? Or perhaps we receive what is rightfully ours!

jaunty bobcat
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Someone told me this is just plagiarism?

floral wolf
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Yes this is