#“Abort the Contortion PT. 2”

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hoary mirage
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Abort the contort
Riven contortion
Abort the contortion
Divide into equal portion

In the slowest motion,
Devour
Devour
A new kind of the firepower
Devour
Devour
Savor the flavor of the sour
Devour
Devour
Ab-a-bort, a-a-abort, abo-ab-abort
The con-contour-c-contort

Contorting into a contortion subject
To an abortion from a
Life already lived
Abort into a reboot
A reshoot
A reboot

Eject the soul into a cold shell
Crafted from the pits of Hell
Until the immortality drives
The contort to insanity
And he forgets to die in vanity

Abort the contort
Abort I-it-it’s contort

Download the data,
Consume the flesh,
Fit the rest into a fakeness

A fake nest
Fit the rest
No beating heart
No breathing lungs
Aluminum skull
Molded dress

A fakeness

Killer mess

A fakeness.

stone steeple
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Cool ass song

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You did a great job with this

light sigil
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The vocabulary here is excellent but I feel, at certain parts, I'm having a hard time grasping the images

hoary mirage
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It’s more abstract maybe than I usually go for

cyan kindle
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LOVE IT

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it sounds more like a song yea!

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a good one at that

hoary mirage
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I think I imagine a dystopian world where people deemed as unfit for society are ejected from their bodies

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Aborted

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And placed into robotic ones

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And then the bodies are consumed as food

cyan kindle
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consumed by?

hoary mirage
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The superior?

cyan kindle
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;-;

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huh

hoary mirage
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Really I was thinking about how uncomfortable I am in my own body sometimes

cyan kindle
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oooh I see

hoary mirage
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Thinking about being more robot than human

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The other part talks more about that

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This is just the process at which said robot is made

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Part 1 provides some better context

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But this part was much messier, I was just spamming in another server and basically formed this poem from that