#Nature I

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pseudo musk
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river lion
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Wonderful! Love the "swollen clouds" image

true pier
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@pseudo musk This may be, without exaggeration, some of the best imagery and what I'm gonna call "reverse personification" that I have ever seen. The first line hits so well, and it sets the expectation that the rest of the poem rides on and delivers! it's brief and that's a good thing, this is stunningly beautiful. Good job.