ooh this is very interesting, I like it
#Trust
brittle jungle
opal echo
me too
this is one of those poems which has a good substance, it has something to say and its on point, and i wish it would rhyme just as a personal preference. It is good, its different (in a good way) from others posted here and i like it. I see that it has much work put into it. I m waiting for future works from you!
opal echo
the more you exercise better and better things will come out of your hands, and i believe you ve got this.