#a Sight to See

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stable seal
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With eyes now closed, he sees her there;
This corner of dreams, petite and fair.
Beautiful, refined, her graceful aire;
Yet eyes of sorrow, with too much care.

A slight sad smile rests on rose-red lips;
And scarlet cap held with tender fingertips.
While her dress flowed with gentle ease;
An outlined form in the summer breeze.

Sight to be seen, framed by vibrant green;
As the trees rise tall with birds serene.
Thier gossamer song of wind in leaves;
These reverent notes from heaven's eaves.

Struggles shed, in awe, her gaze abound;
Her hand extended to a wonder found.
Then eyes meet and his heart bemoan.
Now woken, reaching, and still alone.

reef idol
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BEAUTIFUL ON MY KNEES I LOVE THIS SMMMMM😭😭

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THE MOOD AND THE RHYMING AND THE EVERYTHING SKGBSMFBSKGBDNF

stable seal
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Thank you for your kind words

hidden gorge
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I agree with @reef idol , it is beautiful. Imagery on point, diction on point and overall emotive language on point. 👏🏿