Day-1
Mom ignored me again, just said: "You've certainly been...eating well" I know what she really meant... I'm disgusting... I've been too lenient on myself!
Day-21
Only made it to 3 weeks, ate TWO sandwiches! I'm an absolute failure. Throat burns from puking, but it'll be worth it! Mom will finally love me... right?
Day-34
My face swelled from crying again and she said I was an ugly cow... I don't want to be a disappointment anymore. I just want to be loved... please
Day-65
I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE! I'VE TRIED SO HARD, AND IT’S NEVER ENOUGH FOR HER!
Day-67
The ground looks so far away from here.
[They left the rooftops, never seen there again. Eventually, her hunger was satiated, as she met people in a better place]
#I need help with a flash fiction on eds
maiden gorge
I need some critique (how can I make it better) and impressions (ur thoughts as you read it)