no music, no sound | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

tiny jacinth Apr 17, 2023, 8:44 AM

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To me it sounded normal,
no music, no sound.
That was 'til you came,
There was music with no sound.
Didn’t think it was possible,
to have music with no sound.
Maybe because I was used to
no music, no sound.
But now that you’re here I can’t stand
No music, and no sound.

tiny jacinth Apr 20, 2023, 5:30 PM

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sometimes I like it, how the verse "no music, no sound" sounds

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the comma is practically there for aesthetic, i read it with a really small pause in-between music and no

supple cape Apr 20, 2023, 5:51 PM

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I really like it < 3

sinful cosmos Apr 20, 2023, 6:25 PM

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i think "no music, no sound" creates a really nice effect in this poem

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amazing

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