#I tried making a poem that branches out from my usual format please give feedback and support

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desert fjord
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I have little time
I must write for I have
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More day and I cannot stray
No more delay I must tell you my terror
For the clock is about to strike
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My fear is intense my breath is cold
I lose all glee for it is almost
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Why, why can it stop
My time runs short
The day has come for the clock strikes
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My days are over for the creature creeps near
It has dark green eyes close to the color of lime
The clock ticks to
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The beast makes me sick
I am in dismay for it rots and it's organs hang
I count 1, 2, no
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Pools of blood surround it's posse
I am alone and outmatched but I cannot folley
It's almost time for the clock to strike
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They creep close they no longer can wait
I might be dead soon if I make them irate
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Their eyes lock with mine
I see death and life mix like fine wine
The clock strikes at
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onyx jungle
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Crafty and interesting.
I wish it went to midnight because there’s just something about midnight🤷🏻‍♀️

desert fjord
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Yeah midnight is always a good point to go for