I’ve written these two poems(you don’t have to leave a comment on the Reddit post I don’t mind) but I’m try to pick one and don’t know which to pick, so can I know which the stronger piece is?
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#which is better⁉‼
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I’ve written these two poems(you don’t have to leave a comment on the Reddit pos...
Both are pretty good! I think I prefer the first one tho. Both of them are on 2 subjects completely different but they still have that one thing (particularly at the end) that makes the reader satisfied somehow ^^'
The 2nd one is pretty poignant since the very beginning but that 2 hearts story isn't catchy to me, probably because I cannot relate, but others people might feel the way your poem describes.
That's why I tend to prefer the first one which is reality centered. The image of water was very significant as well, liked it a lot! It has some tricky end tho doesn't it? Talking about dreaming at the very end even if the title is reality. I don't know if that was made on purpose but I took it like it would lead to thinking of what is real and what is not, the complexity of the life were living etc.
Hope that helps 