#My Forever Love

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tepid bramble
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Before I fell in love with you,
Life was just a journey through and through.
But then you came, and everything changed,
And my heart became rearranged.

A day that once was long and dull,
Has turned into a wonderland, full of pull.
And even when the skies are gray,
With you by my side, it's a fairytale day.

There may be differences between you and I,
But love is what keeps us from saying goodbye.
I cherish every little thing that you do,
And I love you even more, this is true.

Watching sunsets hand in hand,
Being there for each other, as life takes its stand.
Building snowmen in the winter's snow,
Together we'll grow, this love will grow.

Even as the years go by,
And wrinkles form, and hair turns gray,
You will always be my pride and joy,
Forever and ever, my love, my girl, my boy.

Before I met you, I didn't know,
How beautiful love could truly glow.
But now I sing love songs with ease,
And whisper sweet words with such belief.

With you by my side, I can be me,
With you, I am free to just be.
No matter what, you'll always be there,
My love, my partner, my forever fair

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@open fjord <@&968253730841567284>

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@hoary eagle

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@simple inlet

open fjord
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The transformation in the first stanza is so beautiful! The second stanza, in the same vein, continues this elated feeling. Ah, the third stanza tells us how one falls even more in love with another. Amazing attention to details! The growth with the snowman and the growth of the two...that's so awesome! The comparisons, the emotions, just beautiful! The commitment in 5th stanza is just love! And the second last is about change; change for the greater cause.

OMG! The last stanza is so sweet! It's so true!

Keep writing, man!

hoary eagle
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So good

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