#Dead Willows
trim jetty
frosty vine
I'll probably start spamming comments, forgive me.
This one was a joy to read and I don't really have any complaints. You have a varied style and the transitions between biological, religious, natural, emotional themes are pretty cohesive. I also like the shape of the poem, which is funny but it's formatted in a way which kind of reminds me of a tree with the narrow neck of 'fall' is kind of pretty.
Your 'voice' has an interesting tone like that of a nurturing nurse - tender, morbid and insightful.
wind relic
the bottom half kind of looks like a reflection of the top half
with "the only reliable foliage..." being the water surface