Use your fond memories or feelings of the morning rain
#Poem Help
shy fiber
cunning flax
ya just write everything you can think of and then maybe we could refine it together
storm lake
I just whipped this up real quick, it's very beginner but maybe someone could help me reduce/enhance it?
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
The night is beautiful,
And so are you.
Orchids are white,
Ghost ones are rare,
Brace are curly,
And so is your hair.
Magnolia grows,
With buds like eggs,
The appearance is majestic,
And so are your legs.
Sunflowers reach,
Up to the skies,
Apparel is gorgeous,
And so are your eyes.
Foxgloves in hedges,
Surround the farms,
My day is warm,
And so are your arms.
Daisies are pretty,
Daffies have style,
My account is illuminating,
And so is your smile.
A morning rain is beautiful,
Just like you.
cunning flax
ah lovely
a way to twist a cliché
not related to the poem itself but i would rather remark on personality more than blank praise on appearance
of course this poem isn't that serious so it's fine
but i'd try to explain how her [smile/hair/legs] are beautiful in the third line
totally not giving relationship advice instead of poetry advice
besides the third lines of the stanzas are a bit weak anyway
I don't quite understand 'brace are curly', 'the appearance is majestic', etc
like just for example
magnolias grow
with wilful grace
no matter the season
and so's your embrace.
Foxgloves in hedges,
Surround the farms,
In devotion unmatched (did you know foxgloves may or may not be poisonous?)
And so are your arms.
Sunflowers reach,
Up to the skies,
a firm tough ambition
And so are your eyes.
(this does actually way less praise and you'd have to see if this matches.)
like roses already have the prescribed property of being related to love, so you don't have to elaborate
but you'll have to assign one to the other flowers you use