hybrid mist
1 Grishnaar
a) passive missing spaces "20%Damage"
b) passive missing spaces "Shieldtakes"
c) passive clarity. This should read something like "when the Shield granted by the battle skill takes damage"
d) new terminology refers to buffs and debuffs as "states". We really don't need a new term here.
In the passive, "there is a 40% chance to inflict Attack Penalty II on the attacker for 5.0s. Ignores 25% Resistance." would be more consistent and clearer.
In the battle skill, "Grants Ally Protection and Control Immunity to the ally with the highest Crit Damage for 10.0s and cannot be dispelled" or "These buffs cannot be dispelled." would be clearer.
2 Olgan
a) Passive - are passive skills cast? is this a continuous effect or does it last only for 10 seconds? Assuming this is continuous, start with "Deals..."
3 Drizzt
a) "this skill ignores their 15% Defense" -> "this skill ignores 15% Defense"
b) "For every 1% HP lost by the target" -> "For every 1% Target's Max HP missing"
4 Torrin
a) Battle skill-- "And heals" -> "Heals"
b) Battle skill-- "dispel 1 debuffs" -> "dispel 1 debuff"
c) Ultimate-- "The cleric then casts a spell..." delete all that -> "Then heals all allies"
d) Inspiration 2-- "debuffs" -> "debuff"
5 Lelwanis
a) Ultimate-- "upon every sacrificed" -> "for each sacrificed"
6 Berengar
a) Passive-- "when being healed" -> "when healed"
b) Battle skill "Horrendous Slash"-- "casts Staggering Smite on the target" I thought we were doing a Horrendous Slash? -> delete all that and start with "Deals"
c) Ultimate-- "Channels and launches hellfire balls" -> delete and start with "Deals"
