#jett abyss asc 2

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misty night
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feel like my mechs are shit ngl

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hopefully its something else

misty night
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Also i think i did pretty bad this game

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Most of my statpadding was early this act

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But today i played HORRIBLE. down 50rr

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Pls ping me if u cld give any insight wld appreciate it

wintry pendant
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I can do it in a few hours

woven canopy
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yo im doing this on 2x speed taking on a break on working on my corrode playbook

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you're buy dash updraft armor smoke and taking this fight

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this isn't good too long range. Just go and clear site even with a ghost smoke go clear site

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"can you smoke b link" you swing out wide before its smokes so ofc this is gonna happen. Patience

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2 smokes

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you are not aggressive enough after this first kill it don't matter

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you have a big ass chance of losing this round cause you gave up all the space

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not you crouch peeking a long distance angle

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it just don't work like that

indigo garnet
misty night
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Thank you for reviewing btw

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Also can i get some general tips i can more easily apply?

misty night
woven canopy
woven canopy
misty night
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Oh dang

woven canopy
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lmao

woven canopy
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ah ye

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I was gonna finish vodding it

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but again working on my corrode playbook

misty night
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Aw its okay

woven canopy
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see

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I hate my life

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anyways

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general things

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is that you should be hunting for kills

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whats the fastest route to it

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and most efficient way?

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you updraft dashing isn't going towards the enemy that you know where they are

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kills kill kills

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It feels you're trying to play too like... team play and rely on them

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instead of them making them rely on you

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ill finish vodding it

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later

misty night
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I feel like im doing it BECAUSE im recording?

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Idk

misty night
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I shld go for more after fb?

misty night
woven canopy
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lmao

woven canopy
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look for fights

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but smartly

woven canopy
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smoke your feet

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also general knowledge might not be applicable for you

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you might do certain things fundamentally well

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and have a whole lot of little issues that need to be specifiewd

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hence why vod reviewers point out every mistake until they see a common one

misty night
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Ah

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Maybe better to wait until you watch the full vod?

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If u have time ofc

misty night
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For which round

wintry pendant
misty night
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@woven canopy @wintry pendant hi was just wondering if either of u had plans to go through my vod? I understand both of you guys are busy and i am not EXPECTING help but would appreciate it if u cld lmk if you're too busy to take a look.

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I dont really check this server so have only been checking to see if there was anyt new w my vod

wintry pendant
wintry pendant
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0:30 If you're going to updraft tower, and you want to use a classic, you may want to ask your omen for a different smoke if you feel that's what you wanted to go for, since you end up taking a long range fight with a classic in heaven bc he does a different smoke.
0:51 you exit a little early, before your team's util. 3 2 1 go is good, but try to pay attention to your team's util a little bit while doing that, since teammates being slow or just vc delay can cause timings to be off.
1:00 drop is too aggressive, you weren't ready to shoot before you entered the gunfight. If you kept going right it would have been fine.
2:06 I don't mind the marshal buy since you plan the econ out, but if you are, you should probably be both planning around it and letting your team know what your plan is. For example:
"Hey guys I'm gonna buy a marshal, lets try to get a pick mid, if we do, omen smoke left side and we push up and get the gun"
2:34 You have no reason to look right side, your teammates are already watching that.
2:37 Panic shot I assume?
2:40 Is this a prefire? I don't think that's a prefire that actually makes sense, especially since he probably isn't within trip range. Just swing it normally.
3:56 no smoke dash?
4:14 You look a little lost here, remember that you just need to fight with someone. Because you're lost you miss two important fights you could've been a part of.
5:15 why route danger andsmokedash backsite for entry? Just go up main and smokedash either front site or top site.
6:36 you are WAAAAAY too scared on low hp. Play with a teammate or play in a rat corner.
7:56 I like the aggression but we dashed from too far up.
8:05 if you just took your time with this shot it would've been a free kill, inaccurate shots. A bit surprising tho so i figure u panicked a little.
9:43 why do we switch to knife and swing?? Why do we pop dash? why do we burn dash so early? u can calm down and take a second, our panicking caused us to do weird stuff and die to chamber

wintry pendant
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11:43 as we call for a B trip, we don't get established on another angle and our teammates die w/o us trading them out
12:50 pop knives before you swing site
12:59 knife out is very risky
13:13 your omen is fighting, get close to the angle to swing when he gets into a gunfight
14:08 wrong order, you're supposed to prime dash -> smoke -> updraft & dash into smoke, if chamber had better aim you'd be dead
14:28 your teammates are fighting, you're WAAAY too passive
15:44 smoke is too late, you dashed in before the smoke popped
15:48 panic flick
16:58 op w/ no knives as solo entry? nah. Ur team only won bc the enemy team decided that taking multiple 1v3s was a good idea

wintry pendant
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19:06 shouldn't you play one-way here? You have 3 site
20:35 You can't call stack B with 6 seconds left. Call that start round.
21:14 Be careful when smoke drops, be aware someone could be inside & angles after it drops
21:17 no smokedash?
22:41 ALL of our shots are inaccurate
24:17 Now is not the time for grabbing guns, especially not when we're 60hp and running through a spam line
27:32 You weren't ready for any follow up players here, either smoke the ground or get ready to fight the next guy. Also, what's up with our inaccuracy?
28:53 what are these shots? You're full running, these aren't prefires, and half of em aren't even on any angle.
28:58 put it on the bomb
30:53 bad peek, and you shouldn't be pushing since the area your Sova is ulting isn't where you're pushing. Once again we also panic and have nothing but inaccurate shots
32:03 we rushed our shots by just a little
34:53 why do we have so many rushed & inaccurate shots against a sova who cant move?

woven canopy
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Also the updraft dash tower is kinda just a bad play on pistol, he should just be going and clearing back site since thats where the enemies were

wintry pendant
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Generally the biggest issue im noticing is that we tend to both rush our shots, and not stop before we shoot. We don't really cleanly one-tap anyone because we're just going a little too fast and not really taking our time.

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You also do seem to forget to get in position to trade people out sometimes, when in doubt, just stick with another dude and shoot whoever he shoots.

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last thing I'd mention is that you seem to get panicked in unexpected situations, which makes you rush your shots even more and do weirder stuff. Try to learn to play more calmly.

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Do you do any practice in the range where you combine both movement and shooting? If not I'd recommend you do that, then move it to deathmatch no audio

wintry pendant
misty night
wintry pendant
wintry pendant
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If you don't think so, check some games where you think you played well and check your own shots

wintry pendant
unique jay
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What would Kay/O do here? Cause the enemy team can get into A link if Kay/O doesn't hold it

woven canopy
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and its fine playing retake cause omen can just push into A main

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take afight

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or legit just play elbow and kayo can insta rotate based off of knife

unique jay
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-# well I had to stop doing it when my Sage went afk and it became a 3v4

unique jay
woven canopy
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yeah it was a playbook for my players

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there's a slide saying "ALWAYS KNIFE HERE"

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so I don't need to put it there