Jett // Icebox // Gold 1

[molten scarab]

https://youtu.be/YhjP9gAeV8A
i did all the main rules because it was gonna be a true submission, but then I didn't have fill requirements
Not sure what I need to do, any and all advise is appreciated, get me out of gold 😭
All links are within description of video.
Thanks!!!

[inner pagoda]

General:

• you have a bad habit of dashing without using a cloudburst. If you’re going to throw yourself into the den of wolves, give yourself some cover and breathing space to work with.
• I don’t ever want to see you dash onto site UNLESS it’s into a cloudburst. Do not buy an updraft on icebox round one, you have plenty of ways to reach high elevations on icebox without requiring an updraft.
• you have another bad habit of jiggling with the operator. I need you to stand still and click the enemy if you’re holding an angle. Do not jiggle, that’s how you miss.

Attack:

• you have zero idea how to entry onto A.
• watch a zekken, oxy, or Tarik VOD and observe how they dash onto site and take A.
• your current entry path looks like mine, and I play Harbor.
• I don’t want to see you lurking as entry duelist. You are Jett, you are the guy that drags everyone’s crosshairs around and is the center of attention. Let your sentinel or controller lurk as you distract the enemy. If you ever push mid I want to see you updraft and dash on top tube (WITH A CLOUDBURST) and then push up through orange onto B so your lurkers B long can catch people off guard.

[inner pagoda]

Defense:

• push up A a little more with the op. Be more aggressive, force the enemy to use excessive utility early on A.
• you don’t have a viper wall to fall back behind so you’re going to need to make the enemy fight for every inch of A.
• watch a Tarik VOD and see how aggressive he is with Jett when fighting for A.