Running until my Legs Explode | Created | Page 1

spare ore Jul 21, 2024, 8:14 PM

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What can I improve pls be as harsh as possible

honest crane Jul 22, 2024, 5:49 PM

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decent video

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the video is funny but the pacing is a too fast

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also you should have had some stakes to the video like a punishment if you fail

spare ore Jul 23, 2024, 12:38 PM

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tru i only had that sunset thing

tepid galleon Jul 23, 2024, 6:24 PM

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Ok i think that you should change scene a lot in the first 30 seconds or so to hook the viewer. But here i had no idea what happend in the first 30 seconds

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the animation at 0:35 was pretty cool but you should do from point to point and use arrows plus tell how long it is to give some perspective

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yeah agree with induren with the punishment cuz im not sure why you would stick to the end otherwise

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I would also turn down the backgroundmusic a little a lot of places

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otherwise the video is pretty good

spare ore Jul 23, 2024, 10:23 PM

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thank you @tepid galleon

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