#Roast our video „I Sold a Doodle for $1,000 in 48 Hours“

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tropic grove
cobalt moss
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The $1000 in the thumbnail just takes space as it is already mentioned in the title.

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The intro is pretty good and properly paced but maybe just come straight to the promise of the title and then have a backstory once the viewer is hooked.

frail grove
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I would use the shot at 12s for the opening visual

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But on the thumbnail, the background is really distracting from the subject

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The endng feels really long, for 2 minutes it feels like an outro (with the music)

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which will definitely make a lot of people leave I think