#Which intro is better

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spark quest
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change "are you struggling with.." to "You're struggling with consistency, achieving your goals."

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the 2nd intro feels too much like an essay and not like a real conversation I would say

ruby fjord
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alright thanks

viscid cairn
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I like the first as it's getting to the point quicker than your second one.