slate burrow
I'd skip the intro and get right into the content.
I think you should try to encompass a specific niche of who this audience is for. Rather than say "want to earn extra money" and trying to encompass a whole group.
Ex. "If you're a college student looking to make 50,000 per year out of college here's what you can do. Open a high yield etc etc."
flint egret
Yes, cut the intro
I remember giving the same advice on the same videos like a month ago tho
errant nexus
thumbnail is too generic, gotta fix that, make it more intriguing like think yourself as if u would click this like would u click this lmaooo
no offense, but i would want to change the thumbnail and put more thought into it
inland trout
What's going on with the thumbnail? Text and hand with mud and plant. Vid is abt money like what
And wouldn't recommend using logo intro. The first 5secs needs to hook the viewer, and not show ur logo that u can literally see not many cm from the vid, if you want to see it
lime mango
I would work on the thumbnail and authenticity of the video. right now its just too bland with AI voice and images. The script could be worked to add personality.
flint egret
Both really give off a corporate/template/canva vibe
dark steeple
Thanks!