roast this vid so far ive been working on | Created | Page 1

uneven tendon Mar 15, 2024, 9:09 PM

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real burrow Mar 16, 2024, 8:21 AM

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The music at the beginning is a little loud. Also jump to the action faster.

compact field Mar 18, 2024, 4:52 PM

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when you say "play" the text doesn't match

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If you wanna play it yourseld and description talk, we dont want that, put it at the end

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deliver the content as soon as possible

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at 15s, it starts but the music doesnt match the "scary" vibe imo

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and we cannot really hear you well

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The clip at 22s I dont understand why it's there

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hope this helps

#roast this vid so far ive been working on