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alpine osprey Mar 13, 2024, 8:25 PM

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and @thorny atlas as well if possible

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again sorry for the ping

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just need to get this thumbnail ready very soon

umbral current Mar 13, 2024, 8:27 PM

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I already gave feedback on this one

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Face is too small

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And the graph feels confusing to me

alpine osprey Mar 13, 2024, 8:28 PM

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yea I changed it

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do you think I should remove the text and arrows?

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do you the title will be self explanatory

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Title: Why Discipline Is RUINING Your Success

thorny atlas Mar 13, 2024, 8:45 PM

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too much effects

#which is better, how do I improve the better one