#Roast it up

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sacred crescent
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woahcrispy.com

ABOUT : I Deleted Crispy’s Youtube Channel.. Prank On Quan😂

Backup Channel 👀 - https://youtube.com/@Crispy2x?si=BfbD-F2AaCcYOYYL

Gaming channel📺🎮- https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyCynJhbozUq9zB7UaVX3BA

Reaction Channel 🤯 - https://youtube.com/@NoCrispy?si=nO0kAlhD_5VevrCD

SOCIAL MEDIAS :
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analog laurel
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Thumbnail: the 2 bubbles and "they deleted my channel" are impssible to read and the big text is useless

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It takes a full minute to start, which is too long especially if the viewers don't know you

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I also didn't like how you plugged 2 videos, 1 meme and merch in the first seconds it probably would've made me click away

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when it starts, at 1:20, we cannot hear "Quan" I got no clue what he said

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It really feels like it stretched and nothing the title says is happening

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at 4mins, we can't see the screen, we can't see the guy being pranked + we can't hear well

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There's not much reaction and we cant get em

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When you cut to the gas station, idk if it's that necessary especially that the mic is really loud/ we can hear the fridge and thats a bit annoying

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I think the video could've been only a couple mins long and it would be better & with an other camera angle

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Also, usually you want more than 1 angle so it's more engaging and there's scene changes

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Lat thing, the outro, is 1 min long, the last minute, I would trim it in yt studio

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Hope that helps, it's constructive critics