#Please roast my video & thumbnail
finite condor
i would say, it's hard to get "what's going on" really fast
warm edge
you mean the thumbnail is too messy?
finite condor
no, overall, i will expand on this:
"What you need to know about Brain-Computer Interfaces"
title is too niche
and about brain computer interfaces, while thumbnail about ads, while hook (first 10 seconds) is about your YT channel
topic is cool, and i would suggest just repackage a bit
- next time deliver a bit faster and "Straight to your face"
example:
YOURs :
1-5 sec
Since i started my YT channel, i watched alot of other youtubers,
(no confirmation on title/thumbnail)
5-8 sec
and since im still don't pay for YT premium - alot of ads
(slightly going into "thumbnail aproval")
8-15 sec
at this point these encrypted in my brain
(that's nice setup)
next time if your video about "how ads made to stuck in your brain" topic ..
It could be about brain-computer interface, but try to package that more simplified and then explain about those....
Kinda "present me what i want, give me what i need"
in YT examples "how to make good thumbnail" is what i need....but this will get less clicks...because i want "How to get 1Million views Effortlessly"...and booth videos could be same, but i want to get more views ...i don't know what i NEED exactly, so i'm not even searching for thumbnails
i worked in marketing, so "ads" is close topic :)
so in your example it could be :
"Why THIS 5 seconds WILL STUCK IN YOUR HEAD Forever?"
"How ADS Always STUCK IN YOUR HEAD"
and so on...you definetly know more english words and can package better than me xD
then instantly deliver
"Ever saw this? -> Play 3-5 seconds of screen recorded add
switch camera to yourself
This comercials always stuck in your head, but why? I found 3 secrets that advertisers use to fool our brain, and that's so scummy, first of all"
this will be ~5-6 seconds intro that is straight to the point and deliver on thumbnail + title
and then you can even don't go over "3 secrets" but just unfold brain-computer interface topic and so on
as for thumbnail
just remove text and zoom ~25%
increase "skip add" size by ~25%, and maybe add slight shadow
overall nice channel :)
first video by the way, is packaged nicely (thumbnail + title combo)
warm edge
thank you so so much!!
amber onyx
It’s really busy
I would remove the text and put the skip ads big cuz I didn’t even notice it at first
And maybe even re/ positioning the girl bigger and we see less body so we see the brain more?
warm edge
thank you so much! swapping for this temporarily, and also trying an alternative version of the script so will make an alternative thumbnail for that to test how to improve the view duration
